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This book which name is Endurance is very difficut to understand the story.So I wrote about if i were Shackleton.

If I were Shackleton,I would gather some clever men and some funny men for my crew.I did not have any information for voyage.So I heared my crew's opinions who were clever and then I decided how to get over the difficult situation.Sometimes people was killed by voyage.So people worried and thought about that.We needed funny people to enjoy the voyage.It will make us forget about voyage only that time.Also it helps us to reduce stress.I want to have a nice time on the ship.

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This book which name is "ENDURANCE" is very difficult for me to understand. That's why, I wrote about if I were Shackleton.

If I were Shackleton, I would gather with some clever men and some funny men as my crew. I did not have any information about the voyage. I heard my clever crew's opinions and then I decided how to get over the difficult situation. Perhaps the crew would die during the voyage. They worried and thought about that. Some funny crew would make us happy and forget about danger. Some funny crew would help us to reduce the stress. I hope to have a nice time on the ship.

What Happen

The crew knew that the ship was done and that it was time to give up trying to save her. The ship was being crushed and cried.
Wild tried to get off however he couldn't. The dogs got off the ship with a large piece of canvas. The crew went over the side onto the ice.